Where I Belong Comments

Very good word texture and rhythm, descriptive congested feeling of belonging with no named place...well done...

Work of an active imagination with beautiful rendition of words. A well drafted and nicely composed poem. Thanks for sharing Vera.

Thank You, I am glad You enjoyed those lines. I think we all, we are born homesick.

Great poem! I think I would feel at home in the place where you belong. I think I know about being with family and yet alone.

Thank You Robert . I rate Improbality Of Being You ++++10 :) is beautiful. You have very soft heart