In an autumn dawn
before the swallows wake
before rotting flowers are placed
on love ones' tombs
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Even poems were not greater than sufferings.. your poem tried to open the door - to a new philosophy Sing our life in poetry.It's wonderful!
part 1 The beggary government is the government that lives on the pockets of citizens instead of creating job opportunities and finding new and varied sources of income, thus young people's hair turns gray and the number of homeless, poverty and racism increases... and human rights are violated,
part 2 this is the nature of reactionary governments instead of moving forward and change, creating well-being for people, the quality of life decreases and people's perceptions harden, and the bigger problem is that when people choose these reactionary governments without accomplishing anything but crises.
wow so much to comment on, with appreciation I will pay tribute, comment silent in my mind later I will return to read this poem again in seasons gathering
Dear Susan, my poem is nice with your beautiful comment, the beauty is in the eye of the beholder, you are very good poet, reader and critic.. every success
Your poetry always deserves top marks- - 10000000000000000000000+++++++++++
This is something you do with ease and intelligence and beauty-: write lines like this- -Even poems were not greater than sufferings../ your poem tried to open the door -/ to a new philosophy then knelt /and the moon was lost in the sky.
Dear Rini Markle now I can say; you are a Brilliant reader understanding the secret of this piece of art, cheers all the best
Dear Susan Williams sorry about the delay in reply, but you are right the poetry is kind of magic with words, your precious opinion is important to me, well done and thanks
Dear poet Rose Marie Juan-austin many thanks for your unique comment and interpretation, exactly that is the nature of life and human being, Thanks again
I have read this poem before but here I am again because this is the grandest poem I have read in some time- - the magic of your words caught me up and have become a part of me. A thousand 10's on this piece of fine art
Yes, life will never be stagnant. Only those who have chosen to die. But those who keeps on believing, dreaming and hoping for the wonders of existence will continue to walk on to that path where a better tomorrow is waiting. Beautifully crafted and well thought out poem.
A poignant and deeply moving write on life imbued with Hope. The superb imagery in this poem pulls a reader to go with the thoughts of the brilliant Poet.
Dear poet Barry.. I am very proud of your poetry's knowledgment.. Your brilliant poems and comment are our best gift we ever had..l hope you have enjoyed my humble poem..keep writing and stay blessed...kind regards
Had to come back and read this piece of real literature again! ! ! now to rifle through your titles and find another soon to be favorite!
Well done..you are very good writer and reader..you love poetry and living with them..l like your ways of reading poems..many thanks for your lovely comment..
You write the most intriguing titles for your works! ! ! ! Then you deliver a magnificently written poem with the most exquisite descriptives and an emotional undercurrent that is not too much, not too little, and all that and meaningfulness too. Going on my fav list 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
your precious comment reveals many hidden treasure inside the pool of this poem, no one else can do this discoveries apart from Dear poet and critic Susan..All the Best and wish you every success
It is great to hear from you this lovely comment Dear poet Aniruddha Pathak, many thanks for your reading...
I saw many lines of brilliant imagery in this poem, dear poet
It is great to hear from you this lovely comment Dear poet Aniruddha Pathak, many thanks for your reading
Nightmares of love and life! ! ! Watching the weather with your steps. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
always you are showing the essence of my poems by highlighting the main key words, not every one can do it...well understood, bless you...thanks
Beautiful nature poem. Lovely pic too. All the five starrs