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Where Have The Swallows Gone? Comments

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Where Have The Swallows Gone?

Where have the swallows gone?
Could they have been swallowed by the inhabitants?
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Nosheen Irfan 04 May 2022

What an ingenious use of words! I really enjoyed the pun but there's more to this poem than just humour. It has depth. It has an undercurrent of melancholy at our disconnection with nature and obsession with technology.

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Dear Nosheen, exactly thought, dear Poetess, so happy to see you here, dear, where have you been. YOU are the only one who comes up with this deepest thought, WOW! I am very happy to read your response here

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You hit the nails on the head, dear Nosheen! Thank you so much for your great support, I am very happy to read your precious words. Thank YOU!

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