Thursday, December 30, 2021

Where Have I Gone? Comments

Rating: 5.0

The darkness surrounds me, pulling me in
with its hopeless power.
I fall to the ground, my eyes welling with
sorrow. The tears beg to come forth like
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Boston Kelley
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Unnikrishnan E S 31 December 2021

"Darkness surrounds me…." the poem starts with this startling statement. The air of melancholy is retained throughout the poem, most effectively. Good one. Top score

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David Wood 31 December 2021

Find an interest in life where you meet people, study or take up an interesting hobby.

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