Wednesday, July 12, 2006

Where Has The Time Gone? Comments

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Where has the time gone?
I'm thirty years old
My hair is about to grey
My cheeks becomes hollow
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Mahfooz Ali
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Aisha Sherazi 15 July 2006

Your time has not been wasted, alwys remember, good things come to those who wait, and the best prize is saved until the end. Be patient, and you will find the journey was what was important, and that all these experiences have given you the edge, so you can be prepared for the final prize. Peace, Aisha

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Brian Dorn 12 July 2006

Mahfooz, I would say serving the family is a noble profession, especially when done with all of your heart. Good poem... well done! ! Brian

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