Friday, June 26, 2015

Where Has Laughter Gone? Comments

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Babies gurgling to sounds and hues;
Like pure white lilies rippling in a stream.
All around, they smile and respond,
Unknown language, just a bond.
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ROOP REKHA BHASKAR
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Dr Antony Theodore 20 October 2015

Like pure white lilies rippling in a stream. Perhaps they see Angles, playing in heaven! No bar for caste, creed or color. Like orchards abloom, pausing for shower. Laughter is really a remedy. dear Poetess. so fascinated by your poem and i began laughing and smiling and dancing after i reading your poem. tony

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 04 October 2015

Verily, the poem depicts the various facets of smile and laugh that characterises our life........10

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Valsa George 09 August 2015

Children smile so spontaneously and their innocent smile is infectious! Whoever sees it, will also smile! In teenage and youth, we smile and the smile has varying shades...... from open loud laugh to suppressed giggles and chuckles. Sometimes the smile is interrupted by tears too! But as we grow in age, smile becomes something quite rare. So we force out smiles as it is therapeutic and a remedy to many of our physical and mental ailments! A great write on smiles!

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