Are there mornings you wake when your path isn't clear,
When the voices you care about buzz in your ear,
When the looks on coworkers' mugs fill you with fear,
When more distance seems truly much better than near,
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either coworkers' OR i guess one coworker has more than one mug. maybe face and coffee mug, both (in which case, i'd use looks) ? i like the rhyming, but i think you left out some words, and maybe you meant to? bri :)
When the keys that you've looked for were where they should be, When the birds that are singing all boycott your tree, SEarching for meaning. and finally you are the meaning....... very good poem. searching for meaning is a perennial search of human beings. thank you dear poet for this great poem. tony
well, this is a wonderful write...good flow and a beautiful thought in its simple form...thank you much sir