Saturday, April 2, 2016

Where Got Meaning? Comments

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Are there mornings you wake when your path isn't clear,
When the voices you care about buzz in your ear,
When the looks on coworkers' mugs fill you with fear,
When more distance seems truly much better than near,
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Jaya Das 05 July 2017

well, this is a wonderful write...good flow and a beautiful thought in its simple form...thank you much sir

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2016

either coworkers' OR i guess one coworker has more than one mug. maybe face and coffee mug, both (in which case, i'd use looks) ? i like the rhyming, but i think you left out some words, and maybe you meant to? bri :)

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Roof Missing 25 July 2016

Thanks for your suggestions Bri! Hope you like the changes. : -)

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 April 2016

When the keys that you've looked for were where they should be, When the birds that are singing all boycott your tree, SEarching for meaning. and finally you are the meaning....... very good poem. searching for meaning is a perennial search of human beings. thank you dear poet for this great poem. tony

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