They fight in fields where flowers grow
of yellow, red and blue -
spattering blood on virgin soil
and blooms of fragile hue.
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A lovely contrast you drew here with nature's beauty against humans' headless brutality. Thanks for sharing
The beauty of nature marred by the ugliness of man's idiocy. A wonderful poem Valerie. The rhythm and flow is admirable. So easy and enjoyable to read.
Beautiful poem, Valerie, Strong message in very poetic verses. The sharp contrast between the beauty and peace of nature and the ego centered fights of silly humans Excellent; ten + I am so happy you are writing again.
While I was reading, a movie was playing in my head. Great job kiddo and keep it up.
As fantastic as a flower and as menacing as a missile. Wonderful work my friend!
Thank you Howard, pleased you liked. My first effort in about six months!
Beautiful Poem. The message is very clear. And ''They fight 'till all lay dead! '' is a memorable speech here. Thanks a lot, dear poet.