Wednesday, July 15, 2015

Where Flowers Grow Comments

Rating: 4.9

They fight in fields where flowers grow
of yellow, red and blue -
spattering blood on virgin soil
and blooms of fragile hue.
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Valerie Dohren
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Rahman Henry 04 September 2015

Beautiful Poem. The message is very clear. And ''They fight 'till all lay dead! '' is a memorable speech here. Thanks a lot, dear poet.

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Amitava Sur 01 September 2015

A lovely contrast you drew here with nature's beauty against humans' headless brutality. Thanks for sharing

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Jak Black 26 July 2015

The beauty of nature marred by the ugliness of man's idiocy. A wonderful poem Valerie. The rhythm and flow is admirable. So easy and enjoyable to read.

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Valerie Dohren 27 July 2015

Thank you Jak.

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Hans Vr 24 July 2015

Beautiful poem, Valerie, Strong message in very poetic verses. The sharp contrast between the beauty and peace of nature and the ego centered fights of silly humans Excellent; ten + I am so happy you are writing again.

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Valerie Dohren 24 July 2015

Thank you for your comments Aufie, much appreciated.

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Terry M 18 July 2015

While I was reading, a movie was playing in my head. Great job kiddo and keep it up.

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Valerie Dohren 24 July 2015

Thank you Terry, much appreciated.

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As fantastic as a flower and as menacing as a missile. Wonderful work my friend!

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Valerie Dohren 16 July 2015

Thank you Howard, pleased you liked. My first effort in about six months!

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Douglas Scotney 15 July 2015

Nice. all quiet on the western front-ish,

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Valerie Dohren 16 July 2015

Thank you Douglas.

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Lyn Paul 15 July 2015

Such a beautifully written poem. Heartfelt words. Thank You

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Valerie Dohren 16 July 2015

Thank you Lyn, much appreciated.

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