Am I to let light fade? That precious happiness
Where exaltation bides within: thy enchanted gaze.
Though it seems I should assent my sorrow to despair,
And die my death - as near it seems to breathe unmingled air.
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It's good! Feels more classical too with the longer meter. Let's see what others have to say. (not that you should really care) I'm glad you feel I could help. I'll add this one to my favorites, for shall we say, I made a difference, in my own very small way? Amicalement votre, Ronberge.