Where Does Love Go? Comments

True love lives in the heart forever. It gives and takes all that life throws at it. Lovely poem with good rhyming 10/10

If it is true love it does not go anywhere, but it stays forever in the hearts. Nice poem! Juan Olivarez! very inquisitive!

Great poem Juan - beautifully written.

Beautiful poem, Juan. Where does love go? I am not so sure myself but It makes me think a bit of it like a water-shortage in some Malaysian cities. We have here equatorial rains but still some cities suffer water shortages. Has to do with the piping. Water abundantly around but not channeled properly for our beneficial use. I love the final stanza in the poem very much. Perhaps indeed it never leaves our heart. Let's let it flow to our minds and souls. Excellent thought provoking poem.

Deep, beautiful thoughts, so true. I do like the rhyming scheme you've used here also, it surely adds to the flow of feelings. Very good!