! ! Where Do You Go, Girl? Comments

Where do you go in sleep? while I now watch this unknown girl; an upper lip that asks so innocently to be kissed? And lower lip that just so innocently enjoys? greatly penned great 10++++++++++++++++++

Mister shepherd i love this poem from start to finish, because i can read the truth i ask are you, like me you just write and whatever is there is poetry I hope so great work Warm regards AJS

You really nailed this toward the end, a bit hard to read at first, but the flow is subtly there and I like that.