Saturday, October 13, 2018

Where Do I Belong? Comments

Rating: 4.8

A nightingale without a song
Where do I belong?
My hopes, dreams now extinguished
all that fills my heart is anguish
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Aqua Flower
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Bri Edwards 15 October 2018

I've a woven patch for your now-broken heart, woven from my words which I do now impart. Get up, get out, go play! Go now, roller skating. Don't dawdle, don't resist, and NO hesitating! ! But if it's raining cats 'n' dogs outside, have hot tea, and think of me bouncing YOU, you rascal, on my knee. And smile, even if weakly, even if only now and then. And grab a sheet of paper. Don't forget your pen! ! bri ;) to MyPoemList. bri ;)

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Aqua Flower 15 October 2018

A very inspirational reply my friend! And good advice! Rascal? LOL

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M Asim Nehal 14 October 2018

A touching poem. Heartfelt. Nicely written, thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2018

A heart touching and painful depiction has been made here as a nightingale without a song. Very interesting presentation.10

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