Monday, January 30, 2006

Where Do All The Nice Girls Go Comments

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where do all the nice girls go,
maybe they melt away with the snow.
Did they sail of to a better land,
if so why didn't they take me by the hand.
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John Tiong Chunghoo 26 March 2006

if you dont take life as an adventure..finding out what is behind all those piggish pouts and all the fair ladies. you aint goning to live. live every moment of failure with excitement. the real girl will see attraction in that.

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Ernestine Northover 30 January 2006

I can't help you there, Vincent, but I'm pretty sure there's a girl for every boy and vice versa. I wrote a poem called 'The Right Girl for Me', my son gave me the idea when he was 'girl' hunting! ! ! ! ! You might like to take a look at it. Enjoyed this one very much. Love Ernestine XXX

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Gina Onyemaechi 30 January 2006

'Teenagey' in sound, as I believe was your intention. Skilfull, entertaining writing. Regards, Gina.

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