Sunday, November 21, 2004

Where Did You Go? Comments

Rating: 3.2

It was a German train.
They always leave on time.
The platform had a sprinkling
of weary travellers, that stood around,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Rich Hanson 13 February 2005

A lovely poem. I too have images like that in my mind that still flit through it on occasions. Totally unbidden, surprisingly still recollected

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Herbert Nehrlich1 21 November 2004

Allan! Your unmentionable appendage may not serve its unintended function any more but you sure know how to embarrass a guy of my shyness. Will tell you in your inbox to spare others the indignation. But if you liked it that means something.

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Lenchen Elf 21 November 2004

Well drawn sense of time and place (and panic!) nice poem H

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Herbert Nehrlich1 21 November 2004

Well, thank you for your kind words Robert. Also for those about the other one (Brigitte) . I can still feel the panic when I realised that there was nothing I could do.So, I call her Wilhelmina.

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