Friday, August 8, 2014

Where Did I Put It! Comments

Rating: 0.5

I had a great love but where did I put it!
Found the right guy but it took a big hit
I was told I had to move four states away
I was too young so I couldn't stay
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Darlene Walsh
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White Monkey 05 August 2015

Hey..I love reading this poem that rhymes because it is truly fine!

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 08 September 2014

Hello poet Darlene Your poem describes what a lot of young people go through, lessons hard learned. I'm glad you are now happy. I enjoyed, Loyd

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Brian Johnston 10 August 2014

I love your poem young lady and it is a thrill, really, to give you a 10.0. Of course your poem is not perfect but it is perfectly delightful. I also have friended you on the basis of this one poem, the only one I have read so far. Welcome to PH, it is a pleasure to meet you. And oh, Bob, I do hope you truly know how lucky you are! : -)

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Darlene Walsh

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