Sunday, May 11, 2014

Where Birds Sing Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is my other home
And I will soon be there
Beneath the starry dome
In the clear atmosphere.
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Elia Michael
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Bill Cantrell 11 May 2014

A very pleasant poem indeed, It is nice to read a poem that has good rhyme and a smooth flow, a birds song is the making of many great poems, and I love how you ended it...with you having to sing also, a great poem.

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