'No, I don’t think I will kiss you,
although you need kissing,
badly. That’s what’s wrong with
you. You should be kissed and
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Sweety, you have an amazing poem but in my opinion. You shouldn't have quoted someone else, because I got confuse of what I was reading.
you really do not need to quote anyone. Your work is excellent and it can stand alone and be read and enjoyed. Gone with the wind embodies Scarlet O'Hara / Rhett Butler very old.