Sunday, July 6, 2008

Where Are You Mum? Comments

Rating: 5.0

You kissed me one morning
and I pulled away
How was I supposed to know
that you'd be gone the next day?
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Secret Yellow Rock Chick
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Bill Thomas 22 July 2008

How can we dare to comment on your pain, except to empathise... but out of the bad has come a very good poem which shows you are more than a survivor, a winner... keep writing, SYRC, please.

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