I'm crying inside, and that's all that I can feel
My pain causing me trouble and it all seems to real.
My head is spinning and I can't seem to believe
That maybe deep down, you're in love with me.
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If I'm not mistaken, this poem seems more like song lyrics (which is considered a poem in and of itself) . The pain being expressed in this piece is very intense and could translate well into a song. If this poem is reflective of what you have or are enduring personally then for this my heart goes out to you. If not, you have composed a poem in which many can identify with and that is what makes this poem so emotionally effective.