Where Are You? Comments

The skies are fading into night Heart is sagging Loosing its battle with the Tears Strong and steady spilling To fill the space.. Facts of life.. in our busy life we loose so much. tony

Nothing can equal NATURE and naturalness. A great thought and nice expression. Congrats.

thought provoking write.liked it.

ammmmmazing! finely written! 10+

Very artfully elaborated the fading human emotion through beautiful metaphors. The worsening condition of a sagging heart indicates that how slowly but progressively time has started to deteriorate the liveliness of life..........10/10

Heart is sagging Loosing its battle with the Tears ...walked along with you thru this familiar way......Brishti Mazumdar

Nice poem ms.Malini :) Kindly do away with those EXCLAMATION marks in the title - is my EARNEST REQUEST......... with very best wishes -shree

despite the annoying attention grab of the exclamation marks used in the title, I found that I rather enjoyed this poem