Sunday, January 10, 2016

Where Are You Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am stuck in butter
How to fly?
Her voice mesmerized me
I can't defy.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 18 April 2016

Stuck in butter! ! Waiting for the heat of the sun. Nice work.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 11 January 2016

Nice poem, Thank you for sharing this great poem.

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Nosheen Irfan 11 January 2016

Wowww. That's a lovely poem on love. I like its unique style. Well done Asim.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 January 2016

How to fly is amazing and sticking to butter is interesting humorous. This is very finely expressed interesting poem shared with reality. A humorous poem on love is fantastic here.10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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