Where Are You Comments

Great flowing rhythm using imagery to guide it through your poem. This poem seems to flourish within, using nature itself to reach out and touch the mind. A beautiful and enticing poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

My favourite line is Mortality is the path of joy and sorrow l like the flow and the structure.

a beautifully written poem about nature good imagery

A detailed depiction of diff. states of nature and human on earth..... loved it

A beautifully organized poem...... I love reading each line... -Rain...

mortality path of joy and sorrow, I like it sir, thanks,