Tuesday, August 21, 2012

Where Are You Comments

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I flew high and high to reach the sky..
Leapt over the leap years,
Bouncing and pounding all my way..
Swirling around the stars & playing with the moon...
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Sruthi Varma
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Sina Farajzadeh 09 September 2012

I think you have that knight or better to say beloved. Nice written.

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The knight is somewhere there and you have to wait till the right one is knighted and his kingdom is decided upon.Good piece indeed.

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Ramesh Rai 22 August 2012

Really, you are a poet by birth. keep it up my frnd. keep writing.

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Aranthabailu Ummar 21 August 2012

when you search all these i was melted along with the clouds where i have to ask them to cool the earth there is waiting a seed to saw and emerge out a flower which is waiting since long spread love on it

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