Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Where Are You? Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am about to do something stupid
I am about to lose my mind
I am about to lose hope
I am about to get over this
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Goodenough Sakhile Dlamini
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Johnathan Juarez 17 September 2012

i really like it thanks for sharing your unique voice

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thank you to all poets iam feeling proudly of myself and greatifull for my fellow poets....................

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So Close 12 September 2012

its pretty good and i like very much the lines Where are you? My love, my heart is going down... I will write you a letter maybe it going to be better My heart without you it like letter without address I can't do anything whenever I think about you But it hurt my heart that I am feeling lonely But it hurt me that it looks like you have forgotten me But it killing me soft to not see you around But it stabbing my heart that's I don't hear your voice keep writing...and also invite me to read your poems..: -) ]]so close[[

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Alexandria Angel 06 September 2012

I love it very much thank you for sharing

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Anamika Goswami 04 September 2012

Sakhile, very poignant lines depicting a lovers seeking for his beloved. Beautiful.

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KwaZulu Natal, Pinetown
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