Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Where Are We? Comments

Rating: 4.5

The beautiful red rose,
The magnificent blue ocean,
The rich starry sky,
The opulent green mountains,
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Husna Amin
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Husna Amin 08 January 2014

Thanks a lot for your kind appreciation. A feedback is always motivating! Best wishes to you and your family for the New Year. @Khairul Ahsan

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Khairul Ahsan 03 January 2014

We often put ourselves into senseless competitions to make our lives tougher and clumsier. You have brought this point home succinctly. A well written poem. I rate it 9/10. 'Beggars we are, imprisoned in our blind pursuits, Dwarfed in our conscience, and the ego speaks it all! ' True, the 'blind pursuits' dwarf our conscience. 'Enemies we make, more than friends in our endeavors Yes, we are slaves, slaves in an endless competition! ' A deep thought, a point to ponder. Greetings and wishes for a very happy new year.

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