Tuesday, January 21, 2020

Where Am I Outside And Inside Comments

Rating: 5.0

Another miserable rainy day
In a long winter of mostly miserable days
Another cold invigorating winter day
Another rich water world day
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Shalom Freedman
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 January 2020

Silent saying conveys that you are both outside and inside. An amazing and brilliant poem is excellently penned.

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Michael Hopkins 21 January 2020

Sounds like a normal human life which is full of opposites. An insightful poem S. F.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 January 2020

This poem is masterfully composed👌😊....10++

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