Tuesday, October 4, 2022

Where Am I? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Loneliness rages within me
like riotous waves of an ocean,
my head spins
like a colourless top,
...
Read full text

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
COMMENTS
Evelyn Judy Buehler 12 October 2022

Overwhelming and disorienting loneliness is so well evoked by this poem, which is brilliantly written.5 stars.

2 0 Reply

I am so grateful to you, Evelyn. Much obliged

0 0
Nosheen Irfan 12 October 2022

I think most of us ask ourselves this question. The sense of rootlessness is powerfully depicted. Kudos!

1 0 Reply

I feel great that you have come to the crux of the poem. Thank You, Nosheen

0 0

"Kiki Materi rated a poem titled Where Am I? 5- start ratings" thank You, dear poet. Note that you have shared your thoughts on the poem on this page. But could not read, PoemHunter is playing truant.

0 0 Reply
Kiki Materi 06 October 2022

The word lethe in greek language means oblivion.now there's darkness stark, of rivers have I drunk has Acheron taken me in or Lethe? If the poem was mine..

1 0 Reply

Wow! That was a brilliant suggestion, dear poet. Thank You. Just shows how talented you are, sir, as a poet. Congratulations

0 0
Chinedu Dike 06 October 2022

Great lines elegantly sewn together with artistic brilliance. A concise and profound verse. Thanks for your immense contribution to the Poemhunter family. Remain enriched, Madam.

1 0 Reply

Thank You, poet Chinedu Dike for your words of appreciation of the poem. Your words make my day! Obliged

0 0
Richard Wlodarski 06 October 2022

You have so brilliantly captured the terrifying essence of loneliness, my friend!

1 0 Reply

It is a great pleasure to read your note on my poem, Richard. Thank You.

0 0

I am grateful to Dear Poet Dillip K Swain for adding this poem to his favourites

0 0 Reply
Rebecca Navarre 04 October 2022

Ever so powerfully written and so heart movingly expressed! .. Many blessings and may the love of loved ones embrace you! .. Definite, Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

1 0 Reply

I am so grateful to you, Becca for the fantastic friendship and meaningful comments on the poem. Obliged, dear

0 0

I am immensely grateful to you, Becca for the profound insightful comments on the poem. Obliged, Becca.

0 0

I had posted a rejoinder to Sandra here. Somehow it's missing. Could PoemHunter help us please?

0 0 Reply
Sandra Feldman 04 October 2022

2 and excellent friend and poet.

2 0 Reply
Sandra Feldman 04 October 2022

Take hold. Don't let desperate moments get the best of you, poetry helps in so many incredible ways. And true admiration and friendship does help too, my admired friend and excellent d.

2 0 Reply

I had posted a reply to Sandra's not here. It has gone missing again. Can PoemHunter help us?

0 0
Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
Close
Error Success