Loneliness rages within me
like riotous waves of an ocean,
my head spins
like a colourless top,
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I think most of us ask ourselves this question. The sense of rootlessness is powerfully depicted. Kudos!
I feel great that you have come to the crux of the poem. Thank You, Nosheen
"Kiki Materi rated a poem titled Where Am I? 5- start ratings" thank You, dear poet. Note that you have shared your thoughts on the poem on this page. But could not read, PoemHunter is playing truant.
The word lethe in greek language means oblivion.now there's darkness stark, of rivers have I drunk has Acheron taken me in or Lethe? If the poem was mine..
Wow! That was a brilliant suggestion, dear poet. Thank You. Just shows how talented you are, sir, as a poet. Congratulations
Great lines elegantly sewn together with artistic brilliance. A concise and profound verse. Thanks for your immense contribution to the Poemhunter family. Remain enriched, Madam.
Thank You, poet Chinedu Dike for your words of appreciation of the poem. Your words make my day! Obliged
You have so brilliantly captured the terrifying essence of loneliness, my friend!
It is a great pleasure to read your note on my poem, Richard. Thank You.
I am grateful to Dear Poet Dillip K Swain for adding this poem to his favourites
Ever so powerfully written and so heart movingly expressed! .. Many blessings and may the love of loved ones embrace you! .. Definite, Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++
I am so grateful to you, Becca for the fantastic friendship and meaningful comments on the poem. Obliged, dear
I am immensely grateful to you, Becca for the profound insightful comments on the poem. Obliged, Becca.
I had posted a rejoinder to Sandra here. Somehow it's missing. Could PoemHunter help us please?
Take hold. Don't let desperate moments get the best of you, poetry helps in so many incredible ways. And true admiration and friendship does help too, my admired friend and excellent d.
I had posted a reply to Sandra's not here. It has gone missing again. Can PoemHunter help us?
Overwhelming and disorienting loneliness is so well evoked by this poem, which is brilliantly written.5 stars.
I am so grateful to you, Evelyn. Much obliged