Where All The Colors Are Blue (Revised) Comments

This is such a good title and coming back to the title in the last stanza works so well. Your them of blue for negativity with your imagery throughout the poem creates a well thought out poem. 10 Karin Anderson

beautiful...........well done! !

good poem..10.....................

Dear Allan, you compose pictures with strong colours (life => blink, liberty=> ashes) which help you to confess your world in an impressive way. I like your style. But choose subjects which may help you better to transmit your messages. The future is yours. Keep on trying.

Very striking way of expressing your ideas. I especially admire the lines 'His life is nothing but a blink' and 'Libery lies in ashes.'