where affection and care are weighed in kilos and grams,
problems are magnified by lens,
and faults are counted in numbers
where happiness is sold for compromises
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Non-attributes of love elegantly enumerated, in such an insightful fashion to capture the essence of love. Love is a spiritual experience, a voyage of pure bliss that affects one profoundly. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Pranayee. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
thank you for your comment........thanks a lot for reading it! surely i'l read your poem...
tragic and yet beautifully expressed pranayee. your comparison of human emotions to materialist life is just amazing. its a hurtful fact that emotions are marketed today and its only deception. thank you for sharing your wonderful poem girl! ! be blessed! !
thank u my dear frnd.....it is fact that life has become commercial....but lets hope that it will change
A new way of looking at the subjectivity of human emotions and adding objectivity to measure. Amazing commentary on the changing mores of our society.
A lovely poem, good depiction and measure of our emotional measures......10
True love overcomes lies with righteous works. Nice work.
thanks a lot for reading........