Wednesday, June 24, 2020

Whentheclockstruck One (For Children) Comments

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When the clock struck one
The moon above the tree giggled
Scared mouse went up the clock
Held it tight not to strike again
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Indira Renganathan
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Mahtab Bangalee 25 June 2020

Clock, Crow, Mouse, Moon, Mid-night to Dawn all are weaved by the time……………. Beautiful poem shared

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 June 2020

Ding-dong one to twelve the clock struck and then struck to one. The moon above the tree giggled feeling the sensation of time with amazing notion. Mouse and crow produced sound as usual. But fearful mouse was musing hearing the sound. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned basing upon the perception of children! ...10

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