Friday, April 29, 2011

Whenever You Call My Name (Here I Am) Comments

Rating: 4.2

You stand far away
Hiding and invisible
Chest has no movement
Pulses of you weaken
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Unwritten Soul
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Mj Lemon 04 July 2019

What you bring out so well is the idea that life is so counter-intuitive. Joy demands a cup of tears. Seeming weakness is but the sign of greater strength...This gem goes to myfavourites.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2017

A strong evidence has given by a person to other saying he is or she is with him or her. In this base you, dear Soul, have inscribed this poem in a captivating way. Let me quote few lines.... If you ever believe in me Could you show me what is in your hand? Perhaps i cant really feel but maybe i can peel Life keeps challenged in the future only few just past As much as the sands life tricks covering the earth crust But...Real deal is when you agree to mend So...Here i am, together and stronger to stand Why afraid to climb this tall barrier wall Trust me i will catch you anytime if u fall As long as you believe in me... I am here for you and it's true We were born incomplete and we need everyone to make us complete. A perfection of the ideal living can be achieved whenever we reform a life with multiple strength. Beautifully crafted poem with a noble hope amazingly shared.10

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Rebecca Navarre 20 October 2016

Love The Way Your Heart Flows! ! ! So Strong with Love, Life, Truth and Depth! ! ! You are Blessed With Such A Very Precious Talent to Touch So Many and Feel as You Feel! ! ! Another Really Wonderful Write! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 20 October 2016

Thank you so much Rebecca...you also have such a great words in your soul to share and to stand...Thanks for your kind heart, time and everything :) Big sunshine for you :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 June 2016

Just dare to share whatever even it is rare! ! ! To care for all mankind. Nice work.

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Frank James Davis 12 April 2013

Whether or not this is a first draft, it's incredible work. Awe-inspiring offering, Soul!

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 18 July 2012

You will never fight alone Why afraid to climb this tall barrier wall Trust me i will catch you anytime if u fall Here i am to bandage your wound again If you there Cry for the mystery fears Give me a cup of your salty tears Then if you smile with sincere Treat me with your sweet candy cheers Just dare to share whatever even it is rare Anytime u call Here I am for you I said it all true its a love preaching patience........ marvelous says masterpiece ! !

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Dead Leaf 06 April 2012

If u believe me Just hold my hand You will never fight alone Here i am to be with you You will never be alone Remember me, supporting bone I LOVE THIS POEM

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Harindhar Reddy 14 March 2012

Every poet is busy making his/her poem more crafty and more catchy forgetting the matter is more important than the verse in the poem. However, I see your style of writing is natural and with true feeling from the heart, yup, when yes we need to trust each other in love or friendship and we have to stay together through thick and thin.... It's great feeling to read your poems as Humanity is petered out in this world and I find it in your Verse! To the poet, a cherry Blossom flower! ha ha :) :) :)

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Stefanie Fontker 11 September 2011

Very beautiful, you have a way with words, and talent for writing poetry. This is a sweet poem, you don't seem to have a mean bone in you.

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Shadow Girl 29 July 2011

wow that was so beautiful, so intense...proud to call u my lil bro'! ! ! SG

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Rekha Mandagere 02 May 2011

What a great feeling and concern for humanity! Ready to offer help for the one who is in distress is a great universal value of life which is diminishing in the present context. It is a wonderful attempt to awaken people towards greater values of life. Beautiful feelings and imagery are used. son, it is a great piece of work. Marks 10+++ Rekhamandagere

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