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You borrow a childhood memory to pose a question: did the escaped partridges lead a free life thereafter? It shows that you often raised questions about freedom while you were growing up? How can we be free? Is freedom given by fate? Do we have to seize opportunities to be free for ourselves? A 10 for conveying a child's questioning thoughts!

Beautifully put. We want freedom! We want freedom! We want freedom! This we must go tell it on the mountain That we all want to drink from life' s fountain Not be tethered in chains like Django We would rather live and die in the jungle Than live in perpetual bondage Our lives not free but mortgaged Sir, thats my bit. Lets collaborate abd see where the new poem leads us. If you please