Sunday, February 17, 2008

Whence We Came Comments

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We whom sway not our fertile seed
Mute are we in our conception
Absent are the concept of time and memory
Oblivious are we to our tether eons binding
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Charles Hughes
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Seema Chowdhury 26 November 2008

the last line of your poem sums it all for us..... excellent composition. very impressive.

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Carol Rhodes 26 November 2008

TOM, THIS IS FANTASTIC. FROM BEGINNINGS TO END AND THE MIDDLE OF THE ROAD WELL EXAMINED, THE PATH OF LIFE/DESTINY ILLUMINATED AND THE SELF-EXAMINATION OF THE PATH MAKES FOR VERY DEEP READING. HOW CAN WE HUMANS SET OFF ON A WELL-DEFINED PRODUCTIVE PLEASURABLE ROUTE SO THAT WE HAVE NO REGRETS AT THE END? LOTS TO THINK OF! MY BEST, CAROL

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