Saturday, July 11, 2009

Whence Came We? Comments

Rating: 4.5

Why wait until old or frail
Before asking whence we came?
Were we, before we appeared here
On earth some bright star? Endearing
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Fay Slimm
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Bob Gibson 14 July 2009

It matters not from where we came from, for its there we will return with the attributes we were born with, and the lessons that we learn we may wonder our existence and ponder on our demise its all recorded in our DNA , that blueprint tells no lies

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Carol Gall 11 July 2009

a really good poem fay asks many pertinent questions

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A meaningful poem floating upon the waves of the unknown ocean of eternity.10+

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Herbert Nehrlich2 11 July 2009

Wow is right but a bit too much earth and not enough heaven.... great job as usual Fay. Hxx

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Catrina Heart 11 July 2009

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! Fabulous written poem Great rhymes and diction used 10+++

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Fay Slimm

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