Wednesday, April 8, 2009

When Your Not Hear Comments

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when your not hear everything changes
the way i feel is so unbearable
nothing matters anymore to me without you
my life is just waisting
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annie collins
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Corey Threet 10 April 2009

Very sad poem I can definitely relate only thing I have to say is there's some grammatical mistakes and spelling errors but other than that I get the point of the poem and I really appreciate it it reminds me of my poem eternal darkness thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! !

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