Thursday, June 5, 2014

When Your Memories Surrounds Me.. Comments

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When your memories surrounds me,
I close my eyes.
I find myself in your arms,
wrapped up in your safe love,
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Kirti Sharma
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Salini Nair 12 June 2014

nice.............like it..............

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F J Thomas 11 June 2014

Those tears could be happy or sad; you left it to the reader's heart. A beautiful work Kirti

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Saurav Singh 11 June 2014

Love is true when it makes one happy. awe-inspiring expressions. beautiful write! ! : -)

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Akhtar Jawad 08 June 2014

Lovely description of desire and frusration

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 06 June 2014

well penned, this is how we forget sadness in the light of happy memories.

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Gold Trybes 05 June 2014

so gentle... so subtle....What really can be compared to true love and the feelings it leaves on one? Sweet!

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