Wednesday, November 10, 2010

When Your Heart Seems Hopelessly Broken... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deceived, a heart full of hurt
Bitter and hard, Hatred burning
A flood of tears
Will the tide ever be turning?
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Aufie Zophy
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Erika Wingo 24 November 2012

Such a true depiction of a broken heart and the emotional roller coaster that holding on to the pain and anger can take us on.

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Lenore Lee 22 November 2011

Wonderful poem that I can relate to. No one should choose to keep hatred inside of them because they only end up hurting themselves more; they make themselves bitter and pained through their whole lives.

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Romeo Della Valle 04 November 2011

I am so happy that you are another messenger of Love and Peace! Great advices given throughout this entire poignant and thought provoking write, especially, for all the young people in the whole World! Thank you for sharing! This is a precious gift from you and it is highly appreciated! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ....

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Raeanne Furfaro 17 August 2011

Now this I can relate to. This is what i see so much of, so much of what my poetry is based on. The heartbreak, the tears, getting through it and over it. I see so much in the things I do, I must write them. This poem is heartrending, encouraging, loving and forgiving all at once. I like the imagery of the person with the broken heart forgiving and moving on. This is an excellent piece of work that I love. So needed in today's throw away society. Well Done.

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