' When Your Bedroom..... Comments

A nice poetic imagination, Tsira. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

awesome....really liked the magnetic lines When swings in a glass- so lovely, of red wine, When its redness doesn't remind only sin's & blood, When now feet itself go back well on familiar lane, & your bedroom not seems for you any more far. cheers

the poetic portrait of your scenic bed room...it isn't far as long as the mood is near to you...10

Hi Tsira And when for forgotten pains promises again, i enjoyed it...well said.. Ramin

Very beautiful, Tsira. May that old moon in your window keep on whispering such poems to you. Love, Sandra X

When swings in a glass- so lovely, of red wine, When its redness doesn't remind only sin's & blood, When now feet itself go back well on familiar lane, ........I would prefer not to walk to my bedroom then

When behind windows the old moon to you talks, And when for forgotten pains promises again, When swings in a glass- so lovely, of red wine, When its redness doesn't remind only sin's & blood, These are beautiful lines, Tsira. Bedroom is the best place to take refuge from all “hustles and bustles” of life.

When a pen the paper of covers binder... was ink - words, open then was my window that new moon looked with light bright breath.. fell thus upon you.....iip

straight from your heart, so touching, well done, thanks for sharing 10

This is a lovely poem. The lines spaced like that give it an ethereal touch. One can see you thinking as you work. A rarity. -LP