Saturday, June 2, 2018

When You Were Here Comments

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The evening was cold yet warm at the same time
For your hands were soft and warm on mine
And without a care in the world we lie
Under the stars that conquer the sky
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G.A. Meyers
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Chrissa162 17 April 2020

Wow beautiful poem. I thought it was about a break up, didn’t expect this.

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 December 2019

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Geneen. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Jonathan 28 November 2018

A beautiful, well-written, heartbreaking poem. Good job.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 June 2018

You left me but I waited for you I waited all night ‘til the sky turned blue...memory, grave, rose, romance. loss........ sadness. all expressed so well also in symbols....... thank u dear poetess. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 June 2018

Geneen, such a lovely touching poem👍👍👍

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Geneen Meyers 28 November 2018

Thank you! [3

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