When You Were Dancing Comments

simply the heart touching art! Admireable

Um are we talking about the girl here, or the land of Palestine both are quite well done... Andy 10

This is absoulty a very good write, and written with much thought... Each and every stanza... Enjoyed this, and I dont usually like to read long poetry, never did, but this i enjoyed... Bonnie

most meliflous piece where excellence of theme parades superbly with vibration that whispers to flow, wrought ingeniously by lucidity of depiction yet with imagery, well penned,10++++, thanks for sharing

Amazing poetic stanzas......beautiful lines in a thought provoking pieces....10

Very well done my friend....! ! ! Regards, Trade.

beautiful, captivating.......thanks for sharing

An excellent composition, one to read again, thanks for this, 10 Lynda xx

A great poetic composition. Metaphysics dances in your poetry. CP

emotional truthfull write...she is still dancing inside your lines, Sadiq...many such 'shes'...dancing continues unabated...good piece...10

A haunting read and a powerful write. Surely a mesmerizing sight. Well constructed. A lot to digest. Perhaps, a little too vague but still worthy. GW62

describes all aspect in your piece...beautifully..... enough for us to be carried by your strong but lovely words her picture is so vivid in your lines...she dances gracefully... greatly written..with a touch of maturity...10++++++

powerful write of fantasy well narrated..with heart rending story...

I could sense that there is sexual enslavement in this story...poem well done

Very poignant. Your images paint a poem picture of a woman fragile, beautiful and helpless to control her fate. She still dances in the landscapes of your mind. Warm regards, Sandra

All us guys get infatuated by them. We fight mortal flesh and the laws of GOD. It is a trying fight at times, with beauty and love The spirit and the flesh..

Very nice direction i like how you took action in this poem very nice Krista

dear sadiq, a very powerful write...............charged with deep emotions............well penned as always...

lovely poem I like it fantastice

Dear Sadiq, You have described each and every aspect of this poem in your P.S..... So what else to unfold? Nothing is left for a reader to illuminate. A well written poem of very strong notion thats all I can say and of course a vote for 10. Regards Naseer