Saturday, April 15, 2006

When You Were Born Comments

Rating: 4.5

The pain never mattered to me
When I saw your face so bright
Such a beautiful baby.
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Connie Webb
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Brian Dorn 28 October 2006

Nice repetition and emphasis on key lines... a wonderful dedication! Brian

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kskdnj sajn 16 April 2006

Connie a beautiful tribute! Thanks for sharing

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Nick Percowycz 15 April 2006

A beautiful poem, from a beautiful lady! A ten.

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