Sunday, February 4, 2018

When You Were Blind In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Read the writes of time
when you are alone
when it's total dark
when there is a pin drop silence.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Indira Renganathan 15 February 2018

Lovely....short and cute with a superb title....great work Akhtar

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 February 2018

Light is written in the dark so wonderfully and drop of silence talks about beauty of hope. Time writes memories in mind. An amazing and expressive love poem is beautifully penned.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 February 2018

A lovely poem! I like: 'Your heart is a book of fluorescent pages'...Thanks dear sir for sharing!

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Aqua Flower 06 February 2018

The poem has a gentle flow to it and a interesting message about love and time! Lovely to read!

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Loke Kok Yee 06 February 2018

Even blind love will become beautiful in your poems. Thank you sir

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Bharati Nayak 05 February 2018

Stop for a while on a page you cannot read it slowly and smoothly touch the page again and again feel it and smile. Time had written this page when you were blind in love! - - - So Beautiful ! ! ! !

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Khalida Bano Ali 05 February 2018

A beautiful poem, loved it.

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Rini Shibu 04 February 2018

Time has written this page When you were blind in love... Beautiful line

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