Friday, August 10, 2012

When You Want Something You Can'T Have Comments

Rating: 4.5

I can still remember all the pain that I felt, I can't believe that back then the thought of you, or sound of your voice could make me melt

I can still remember all the pain that you caused and how in the end my heart was the one shattered in pieces on the floor, but what I can't believe is that after all that I just wanted you more
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Aria Siren 10 August 2012

Disappoinment is sometimes the worst kind of pain...I love the honesty of this poem. Nice job.

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Alexis ... 10 August 2012

Back then it felt like the worse kind of pain and it felt like i couldn't go on, but looking back on it now, I realized it made me smarter and it made me strong. hands down favorite line. nice job

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Bethany Buhl 10 August 2012

Wow I wished I had written this.It's so beautiful.

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