Sunday, June 21, 2009

When You Walk Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you walk away, i tell you not to leave me its hard to let you go.
Your all i need and all i want,
he said, i wish i could tell you i loved you but i cant,
its not that simple.
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Kearbear Mehan
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Adi Cox 12 July 2009

This is a nice little poem that highlights the complex animal that is human relationships. This poem neatly describes what it is like when people and their feelings move on. well written.10/10.

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