Sunday, August 6, 2017

When You Wake Up Comments

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The sweet wind beats against my door
Reminding me that it's your time to
Wake up and open the windows
To inhale the scent of opening buds to
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Bharati Nayak 08 August 2017

A very lovely morning with sweet wind beating against the door, sun rays creeping stealthily into the room and running brook singing tunes, reminding you of your love- - A beautiful piece, thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 August 2017

My regards. I am glad you liked the poem. Thanks for taking time to read and comment.

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Susan Lacovara 07 August 2017

You bring about a beautiful dawnong, in appreciation of the promise of a new day. I am glad to wake up to this lovely poem. Have a most peace gilled and purposeful day! Glad you shared!

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 August 2017

Your comment is an absolute beauty. Thanks a ton for reading and comment. Regards.

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Lamar Cole 06 August 2017

Very delightful poem about waking up. The imagery is wonderful.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 August 2017

I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking time. Regards.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 August 2017

Soft rays creep and sweet mind beats with perception. Tune of light gives love and mind continuously sings. An interesting poem is very well penned.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 August 2017

Thank you very much Sir for reading and comment. Regards.

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