When you thought, he will be your dear
Who will be your brimming light
The one who will take you to height
The one who will fly away all your fear
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You wanna care for yourself You wanna care for him You just count scattered pieces of your love. pain in love. sufferings.... counting the pieced of the love... very fine and emotional poem dear poetess. tony
This is the feeling of sad end to a true love. Very nicely crafted. Seeped in emotion it flows very nice. Thanks for sharing.
can I suggest something if you don't mind it may improve the output of poetry beyond limits but many mind so I daren't do
Yah! Why not? Improvements are always welcomed...