When You Think Of Me Comments

A beautiful poem Kim. leaving has so many departures, staying so many memories, tomorrow so many possibilities, if we take first no return steps

I can feel the raw emotion that created through each line..! ! ! this poem, regardless of it’s powerful content, is a delight to read, :) i'm write as well so please check my site 2 :)

great piece

What an honest heart felt poem. Thank you for the reminder that children have their Needs just as you do. James

nice do read my moms smiles and the sun has set u may like

'So here, I humbly ask That you allow my spirit to go free By simply smiling inwardly At the times you think of me' - an excellent ending of a beautiful poem!

'keep on keeping on' was a favorite slogan of poet Lento Maez, a linguist and a Professor who became a good friend of pine through our mutual reading of each other's poetry on this site. Sadly, he has not submitted any poem on this site after 17 September 2014.

Beautiful poem dear poetess...........thanks

touched by your poem, will keep it for a long, long time....

So here, I humbly ask That you allow my spirit to go free By simply smiling inwardly At the times you think of me..... Thanks for sharing

Death is not the end. 'We shall meet again with a heart full of love.........very nice poem. it inspires. dp not cry on my depart...... thank you dear potess..

a poem of celebrating the life of a departed friend and to carry on living with the belief it is not the end? ...a truly inspirational poem.... well written.

Beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Kim.

Do not cry on my depart, rather celebrate and be merry. be you and yourself.... dont glorify my name. but be honest to keep my memory as same..! ! ! a profound expression. makes me read again and again. thank you poet for sharing. - Siddartha

Another Jewell as God's Gift! ! Thank you Poet!

A very nice poem, Kim. I especially like the way you ended it: So here, I humbly ask That you allow my spirit to go free By simply smiling inwardly At the times you think of me

You see are so mundane And only prevent my departure From this material plane So here I humbly ask That you let my spirit to go free..... simply smile inwardly........ very nice poem with a sad tone.... thank you dear poetess. tony