Saturday, January 24, 2009

When You Tell The Truth Comments

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I'm sorry if I doubt it,
Your plan to tell the truth.
I hear you might try charging.
Perhaps, set up a booth.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Cristy Upshaw 08 June 2009

Very interesting concept and so very true. Nicely done.

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Frieda Lumpkins 20 February 2009

Thie poem tells how our little county is, the ex-son-law and his cop buddies.None know how to tell the truth.And maybe, just maybe they will read this.Very well said

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Meggie Gultiano 13 February 2009

ngeek..nya ha ha.I hope you are telling the truth.. wow, i love this line. *********************************************** .And I would stand among them In lipstick and a thong, Prompting them to join me in A hot tub sing-a-long. **************************************************** this make my day..GW..Love you for this..nice, nice.. Hugs, Meggie

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this is my favorite poem of yours. the creativity, wisdom, structure. they all hit my spot

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Linda Ori 01 February 2009

Hold on a sec.......I thought you may be addressing me for the first few verses - lol! (What? You WERE?) This is deliciously mischievous - and such a fun read! Sarcasm in spades - great job! Linda :) :)

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Magda Graf 01 February 2009

What a liar that must be! Your poem is wonderfully sarcastic and great fund to read.

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Vaibhav Pandey 31 January 2009

this poem brought smile to my face....very nice.

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Bridgid Patrick 28 January 2009

I reallly like this! I love the rhythm, flow and the underlying sarcasm. well done! ! x

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