When You Stepped Into My World Comments

Nicely written a nice work of urs...

I really liked your poem of that I'm very clear, If you believe in yaself you, ll alway, s beat the fear.

i hate it when they do that. they brighten up the moment but then they leave letting darkness fill your world once again. i love how you changed moods so suddenly in the poem. good right.

This one in particular is powerful. The light one brings, and the darkness they revive. It's a good connector for a lot of people. Good Job. Keep writing.

He sure did brighten up everything, for a while