Saturday, December 6, 2014

When You Smile (Ghazal) Comments

Rating: 5.0

You smile sweetheart many flowers sprung,
Wordsworth and Shelley and Keats are sung.
Tide of beauty brings out many pearls,
Ugliness sweeps out like dirt and dung.
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Sarmad Mirza 10 December 2014

beautiful poem beautiful thinking beautiful persn

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Salini Nair 09 December 2014

beautiful, beautiful, beautiful...............................................

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Salini Nair 09 December 2014

beautiful, beautiful, beautiful...............................................

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Salini Nair 09 December 2014

beautiful, beautiful, beautiful...............................................

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 07 December 2014

Oh! this is beauty with no disguise, simple and profound as well..........amazing write......10/10

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Khalida Bano Ali 07 December 2014

I remember sweetheart a heart I had, With your earrings something is hung. Beautiful........10

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Khalida Bano Ali 07 December 2014

I remember sweetheart a heart I had, With your earrings something is hung. Beautiful........10

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Valsa George 07 December 2014

My days are yours my nights are yours, You are a song round the clock it's sung. What further assurance of love is needed to make your beloved smile that sweet smile! Enjoyed!

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